Thursday, 30 June 2016

Story telling

It is all about costalason
Walt:story telling 
Feedback:
FEEDForwarD:you Don well but put some more detail in it. Guiana 

Spot's star

Walt:spot'star 

 Sports start is all exercising and having fun.

Feedback: I think you did really well at your batting 

FEEDForwarD: I think you need to get better at keeping an eye on the ball

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Wednesday, 29 June 2016

Science investigation

Feedback: this is quite a good post besides those mistakes that were there. Ka pair to mahi! Quentin
Feedforward:I have found a lot of mistakes in there or it might be that you need to have spaces between the full stop and the word
Walt:science investigation 

Tuesday, 28 June 2016

Zyd's te reo

Feedback: great job zyd I like the sentences you used 👍😄marion
FEEDForwarD:well you could make a verity of sentences 🙂marion
WALT:te reo